Saturday was a great day, because my family relatives and I went to the beach at Long Bay. We packed up some food,swimming togs and most importantly sun block and hats.
We got in the car and drove to the gas station because the car was running low. Then we where back on the road. When we go to Long Bay, we had some food because we were hungry. Than we changed into our swimming togs and ran into the water. My sisters and cosines had a water fight because we brought water guns with us.
After our swim, we had barbecue chicken. After we ate all our food, we played volley ball , I didn't want to play volley , so I played with my cosine John and my friend Mickey . We played tiggy. John was in and we ran away as fast as we we could. we hid on top of a tree but John found us and so we went back to the tent,
Than It was time to go home. We packed everything back into our cars and then we said goodbye! to everyone. Than we all got back home. When we got home I was tired from all the fun we had.
My favourite part was when we had a water fight in the water. I am looking forward to going to the beach next time to have more fun with my family.
WALT: plan our writing by focusing on the important information.
I know this when I write the keywords about my holiday using a brainstorm map.
I know this when I write the keywords about my holiday using a brainstorm map.
Hi R.J, I like the way you used the colours for each paragraph in your writing. I like your title because it matches your story. I haven't been to the beach. What is it like at the beach?
ReplyDelete